This is my first poem and it meant a lot to me but it is kinda hard to understand unless you yourself were either involved or heard about the situation. The second poem is a lot better in my opinion:
Inside of Me
What you did was wrong
You kept this charade going too long
Didn't you see how she felt?
You made your best friend melt
You don't care how they feel
Too bad he wasn't real
Don't try to breathe you'll drown
The current will pull you down
Your emotions will eat you alive
You'll keep your feelings locked inside
You shouldn't be mad at us
You're the one that made it all bust
This anger that you now see
Grew up inside of me
The thunder will crash
You'll get caught in the clash
You need to change your ways
Before the end of your days
Like sisters strong we'll be
Don't mess with us three
We were your friends but you betrayed
The best friends you'd ever made
Now you will be alone
Except for your imaginary clone
You'll betray all your friends
This is how the story ends
This hatred you now see
Blew up inside of me
This poem was written very recently and I have gotten several positive comments on it so read it yourself and tell me your thoughts. Initially I thought a title would draw away from the poem but eventually I decided on Mother Natures Band since I liked that phrase. It was written for my L.C. II class and I wasn't planning on carrying it any further but I felt I should share it although there could be future edits:
Mother Natures Band
The day was bright and new,
And not a sound was heard,
Then the sky turned angry blue,
They exchanged their frightful words,
The whistle of the wind,
Made a harsh hollow sound,
She had not believed his sins,
Until she hit the ground,
She couldn't deny his past,
Though she loved him for so long,
She knew it would never last,
Too much had already gone wrong,
She felt the first rain drop,
Like a needle piercing through,
She wishes for it to stop,
Tap, tap, tap... it continues,
The torture of the rain,
Is nothing to compare,
To the everlasting pain,
Of the wind whistling through the air,
She tries to block his screams,
Hearing only mother natures band,
Making it not as bad as it seems,
As she lies down in the sand,
She knows he will not stop,
As she fears for the worst,
But the chance of death drops,
As she reaches inside her purse,
She moves her hand with caution,
As she feels the metal at last,
The clouds break and out come the sun
As you hear the fateful blast
I'm sure there will be more poems to come but probably not untill I get a break from school. I like writing poetry and have been told I am good at it. All poems are written by and property of Katie Nagel. No plagiarism people this is my work of art not yours. You can print it as long as you give credit to me and ask first. Not trying to be rude but you know how it goes and I am not in a wonderful mood today. Well untill later. Bye!
